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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 9:16 pm


In a place
Where nothing is real but pain
I save face
By always acting sane
Its cold out here
So cold and scary
I say I know
But do I really?
I’m acting the part
Going through the motions
Filled with questions
Full of devotion
I question the world
And all you say is right
But well never know
Until we see the night
Brings forth the pain
In shadows secrets are shown
You’ll never see the light
Until you’ve seen the unknown
The dawn brings the light
That burns my eyes
You don’t understand the song
Until the reprise
But listen to the music
It will make you want to dance
Something you can see
But only at a glance
And if you wonder
Why you feel this way
Just keep wondering
Until today
When everything’s better
The light doesn’t pain
Where everything’s different
But you’re still the same
PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 9:17 pm


My light eternal
You will burn for always
Always in my mind
The scars are nothing
Next to the wounds you give me
The war stories of love
Nothings fair
And that’s the point
How else would we have fun?
I taught you the way of the word
You taught me the way of your world
I never know how you feel
You always know what’s on my mind
My blood boils
How dare you say that to me?
How dare you?
When you know how I feel
Feel about you
Feel about everything in this world that’s not real
And that’s what you are
Not real
I love something that doesn’t exist
Never has
Never will
Never can
Never can be
Never can be you and me
But a girl can dream can’t she?
Dream of what couldn’t be
Search for something
She knows she cannot have
And you wonder why I yell
Get angry and sad
So frustrated
Get all weird and hang up
I must be pretty confusing too
I’m sorry

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birthlotus

PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 9:18 pm


I pretend
That I’m dieing
Pretend
That I’m lying
Pretend
That I’m crying
Pretend
That I’m dead
Pretend
That I’m crazy
Pretend
That I see things
Pretend
I’m not human
Pretend
That you care
(the latter is the least true of all.)
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