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Mommy's Little Angel

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Sprockette

PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 10:08 am


My little darling,When you entered my life,it was a true blessing.
You're beautiful sparkling ocean eyes,deep with innocence and laughter.
A blessing that was never to be hidden from the world.
Your playful spirit and your bouncy curls made me proud to have a little bit of light into my dark world,my heart was whole.

My little darling,you are now my little angel.
When I saw the light leave your eyes,the light you brought to my world left with you.
To hold your cold,limp hand and the thought of having to let you go brought a flood of tears over my grief-stricken eyes.
I'd never get to hear your laughing voice calling to me and saying,"Mommy".

Now I have to walk in this cold,lonely world....knowing that God has lain his pure hand upon you and taken you away from me.
These pictures that held dear to me are now a constant reminder of the curse nature was so intended on giving you.
Why my baby boy?
Why my innocent,baby boy?
You cursed wretch? Why didn't you take me?
Why do I have to live with a broken heart and have the pain wash over me like a tide...drowning me.

My little Angel,I pray to you every night and I hope that one day I shall see your deep ocean blues and see your heavenly smile.
And we can walk through the pearly gates tofether...forever.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:45 pm


Oh my god! That was beautiful! Is it a true story? If it was, I am very sorry. If not, I am sorry that i assumed it was. It brought tears to my eyes and reminded me of when my cousin died...She was only a year old....and i barely knew her...It took me back to then and it made me sob. It is a beautiful poem, so keep up the good work.

XMaster_of_destructionX


Sprockette

PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:31 pm


Thank you so much!
It didn't happen to me but I was talking to a friend her on Gaia and she told me she lost her son very early and I felt sooo terrible about and I was crying,so thinking about that inspired me to right this poem.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:46 am


biggrin . You're welcome. Its very hard to lose someone like that. Especially your son.

XMaster_of_destructionX


Sprockette

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 4:43 pm


That's pretty much why abortion angers me b/c it's another life and it deserves to live
PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:10 pm


Abortion angers me also. If you didnt want to get pregnant, don't have sex in the first place. It would save the world a lot of problems. Abortion isn't the only way out.

XMaster_of_destructionX


Sprockette

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:37 am


I know right? ever heard of Adoption?
but anyway,I like to write poems that relate to the real world...and the world beyond
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