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 Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:29 pm
~The death wish~
when hearts get broken
real tears fall
i sit there hoping
i can show you all
my heart's desires
is all i want
fight fire with fire
you'll be gaunt
time is essence of the heart
teach me lessons
that tear me apart
my thoughts lesson
and i cry
you shouldn't be messing
with me, i want to die
a river forms behind my eyes
the love i had for you dies
take the arrow, aime it straight
hit my heart, fill me with hate
listen up and beware
my thoughts are churning and i dont care
time is shortening, you must hurry
death is threatening, my vision is blurry
i hate to say this,
and you'll miss
I wish i had one last kiss
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:37 pm
Wow! this is great!
Thank you for sommenting on my other poems too! mrgreen greatly appreciated.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:43 am
biggrin ..thanks. Its no problem, your poems were really good.
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 5:13 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:19 pm
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