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 Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 9:20 pm
Hello everyone. I am getting a little bored and so figured I would use this time to put forth an idea for an rp that anyone in this guild could comment on, help me polish, or just have a looksy over but I am gearing towards helping me polish up lol. It is an idea that I made maybe two weeks ago, if not more, or less, and haven't really looked over in a while, in fact I just found it and figured that I would give it a shot at life in this guild. Well anyway here is the idea, if you want to say something then say it 3nodding
Introduction
Every day children are born. Some normal, some gifted, and some handicapped, but there is one thing they all share in common. They don’t have a choice. Not in where they are born, how they are born, who they are born from, not even if they will be a girl or a boy. Human beings just seem to happen. A natural entity, one that has existed seemingly unchanged for centuries. That was to change. On December 6th of the year 2010 the first one was born, the first of the new line of human evolution.
Although looking identical to the previous line of human, the new human had superior intellectual and physical capabilities. Soon after the first one was born others started to arise. And with time came the first generation of full blooded neo-sapiens, what they were now being called.
It was thought that they would be just like their parents, smart and strong, which was correct for the most part but there was one thing that was different. With the blending of two evolved humans born from normal parents came the pure blooded evolution which unlocked the true potential of the neo-sapiens. Not only were they smarter and stronger then normal humans, the new generation of pure breeds gained abilities beyond the normal humans scope.
Story
The year is 2050 and it has been 18 years since the Great War ended and human life has finally reached a balance. The war for freedom of neo-sapiens ended in restriction of neo-sapien breeding, preventing pure breeds to be born. Man kind has made colonies on the moon and mars and has put up service stations in-between each. Some pure-breeds still exist but are few in number and fearful of revealing their abilities. Will another great war be started to fight for freedom or will the current generation of pure breeds be breed back into society to lose their blood to a generation of mixed breeds? Let’s find out.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:01 pm
I think it's very intersting. ^_^ Could definitely go somewhere if you put your heart into it. People like to role play this genre, I've noticed! Which is great!
As for some hints, I would defnitely give some more information on what the Neo-Sapiens can do, how they were created, and why... sorry if I missed that in your review of it. xD But, I think that would give more depth to the storyline. ^_^
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Romeo for Tay Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:58 pm
There more or less naturally occuring. Just isolated incidents were a what should be a normal child is born with locked blood, that would be first generation neo-sapiens born from two humans, and then when two of such people have a child they then give birth to full potential neo-sapiens who have the special abilities.
As for the abilities I was just thinking psychic abilities like Pyrokenisis telekenisis telepathy and other such abilities.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 1:04 am
Ohhkay, I get it now! Evolution, then? =D
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Romeo for Tay Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:01 pm
Darn I really should have read this post before I started my second rp...the plots are so similar!
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 5:53 pm
Really? Well you know what they say, great minds think alike lol Ah and yeah it is evolution. I didn't want to go with Human made advancements cause then it might sound too much like Gundam seed with the coordinators and such
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