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iADDY

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 2:02 pm


here is my poem.. Tell me what you think, but dont be mean about it..

Life is so cruel, so broken
like glass, easily smashed, eaisly broken, easily taken away.

No matter how many hopes I have,
People come and destory them,just as they destory the mirror with their reflection

Why does it always happen to me, my hopes, my dreams, the fun
all destory in a flash, from happiness to sadness like a quick mirror.

Be nice ends everything blowing up into your face.
Nothing works, nothing makes them happy. Seeing me miserable is a start with everyone.
Laugh in my face, laugh it all you want, like a overcolored ugly clown.

Make your jokes, make your laughs, I really dont gave a s**t anymore.
Destory my life pieces by pieces, scatter the glass into the wind.
It will come back to my, sooner or later like the wind. One day blowing, the next
silent as if never have been there.

Be happy while you can, cause their are people who would smash your happiness b/c they
dont like what they see in the mirror. The mirror shows it all, my happiness
and your sadness.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:03 pm


*claps loudly* Beautiful! 3nodding

Sprockette


iADDY

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 10:36 am


thank you redface
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:44 am


Your welcome mrgreen !

Sprockette

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